To Talduras and Seraphim

Monisawa · 2005-09-03 18:23:36

I am begining a small writing group with a friend of mine.

http://jerbl.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=544

You are both welcome to come and comment and read whatever you will. -_- in fact the more I can get in on this the merrier....so whatever you want to do is fine. I wish we had more people on this whole forumn, but it is a comfort to come on to hear from you two, who are always constant.
thanks
mike

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-03 18:27:36

Cool! I'll look at it soon. Sorry I'm not...in the right mood today.

Monisawa · 2005-09-03 21:04:55

GROWLF......I eat all that get in my way. GRRRrrrrrrr. Like that?
or
Uhhhhhh, I feel so faint. WHereE iSs tHHhe KeeyBOoarDddded?....
or
Huh,......story...what....z.zzzz.zzzzzzZZZZZZZZZ
or
Nothing sounds interesting right now.
or
or
or
or
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Okay, I am ored out.
sorry to bother you....or in this case Badger.
thanks for the thought,
mike

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-03 23:11:53

Guwhu?

It's just..my dog died today.

So..I'm not in a wonderful mood.

But...I WILL check it out.

Talduras · 2005-09-04 03:33:42

Well... um, I don't quite know what the thing is about (even after reading).

Much as I wish I could band together with people, I feel inadequet (sp?) about asking. I am a major pain to deal with when I request something, even drawing. Just ask Jami.

Worse yet, you may get caught in what I call my "Vortex of Anticipation." Put simply, I've got a prologue for a story I plan to write (think novel length, like a series), I've taken forever writing it (mostly my fault), and I've somehow drawn the attention of many different people, which may not be such a good thing for them. Mom wants to see more, Jami wants to see more, and Jeremy... hmm... I don't think he's even read any part of it, but he apparently wants me to write more, somehow. I've got a general layout of lots of things (except what the plot after the prologue should be, even though I have the characters figured out). But, I have a very slow work ethic, and it doesn't help matters that I'm a perfectionist. Actually... my slow work ethic may be BECAUSE of my perfectionism.

So... um... yes, that was random, and I don't know what I was really trying to say with all that. Heh heh...

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-04 21:36:05

It means you're a lazy bum and you're writing with me tonight!

lil_red-fox · 2005-09-05 13:48:03

how do you do the smiley face w/ the tongue stickin' out?

Talduras, I want you to write more, too!! you must write more!!! grr...

Talduras · 2005-09-05 14:15:14

lil_red-fox wrote:

Talduras, I want you to write more, too!! you must write more!!! grr...

...How'd you get sucked into the vortex? I know I posted a short story, but that was an experiment. Even I didn't like that one. I like my prologue, though (granted, have a bit of work left to do on it).

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-05 22:07:32

*Pokepoke* He's learning. We just gotta learn to yank the information outta him. Isn't he cute?

Monisawa · 2005-09-06 16:33:38

Talduras wrote:

Worse yet, you may get caught in what I call my "Vortex of Anticipation."

yes, I am familiar with what you call the Vortex. I tried to draw a picture for a writer....and I never could get it right.....though that was 4-5 years ago. I could so much easily focus down on what peole want. The problem, though, is that sometimes even THEY are not sure about what it looks like. When I write stories, I usually have complete visuals....some things are vague, but for the most part, I know exactly what is going on andhow it looks....of coarse that is just because I am an artist. Everything I do and imagine is visualized.
thanks
mike

Talduras · 2005-09-06 17:36:01

ohhhhhhhhhh. Why does Justin have to keep me in suspense!?!?!? It's not fair, Monisawa! We should make him post more. *Tickles the Justin, who's actually at work right now with an innocent face*

Monisawa · 2005-09-06 20:39:18

Seraphim Moonshadow wrote:

Guwhu?
It's just..my dog died today.
So..I'm not in a wonderful mood.
But...I WILL check it out.

I am sorry that your dog died....we have 4 cats and 1 dog and it would be very sad if any of them died....

BTW, what was the name of your dog? If you tell me, would you mind if I used he/she in my story. I promise that it will be special!! I have one of my cats also in this particular role...who is very old.
thanks
mike

Talduras · 2005-09-07 00:06:10

Mello. She was an Australian Blue Heeler. She has a sister, Bandit, who's still alive. Mello is...lighter in color, sort of like a dalmation but..with blue spots. *Patpat* Arigatou gozaimasu....

(Yes, I STILL am using his account. Bad Seraphim!)

She was a very excited, happy dog. Poor gel...

Talduras · 2005-09-07 02:31:52

Wow! Seraph forgot to change to her account. Guess it's my fault for leaving auto-login on.

Talduras · 2005-09-07 02:36:25

Monisawa wrote:

yes, I am familiar with what you call the Vortex. I tried to draw a picture for a writer....and I never could get it right.....though that was 4-5 years ago. I could so much easily focus down on what peole want. The problem, though, is that sometimes even THEY are not sure about what it looks like.

Yes. I've had that problem too. I know much of the generalities, but I do better with function rather than detail, at times. What's ironic is the stuff I know the most about is the stuff that's most problematic for others to draw. :-/

lil_red-fox · 2005-09-09 23:14:54

Talduras wrote:

lil_red-fox wrote:
Talduras, I want you to write more, too!! you must write more!!! grr...
...How'd you get sucked into the vortex? I know I posted a short story, but that was an experiment. Even I didn't like that one. I like my prologue, though (granted, have a bit of work left to do on it).

oh, I was just doing what everyone else was doing and telling you that you should write more... = 1

Talduras · 2005-09-10 17:52:27

lil_red-fox wrote:

Talduras wrote:
lil_red-fox wrote:
Talduras, I want you to write more, too!! you must write more!!! grr...
...How'd you get sucked into the vortex? I know I posted a short story, but that was an experiment. Even I didn't like that one. I like my prologue, though (granted, have a bit of work left to do on it).
oh, I was just doing what everyone else was doing and telling you that you should write more... = 1

Pfft! Bandwagon.

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-10 19:43:16

So start posting already! Or do I have to do it for ya?

Monisawa · 2005-09-13 16:50:38

Wow....an entire battle just commenced. *_*

Monisawa · 2005-09-13 17:52:18

Just a question, are ya still going to join the writing group? *nudge nudge.....????
thanks
mike

Talduras · 2005-09-14 03:28:34

Possibly. If all else fails, just consider me in, though I'm not sure how much I'll be writing in the future. Stupid lack of time. -_-

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-14 23:10:22

Um..well..I don't know if I'm worthy. ^_^

Monisawa · 2005-09-15 08:29:24

Worthy? Worthy for what? Any contributions would be appreciated. blewjewl might be a little intimidating, but we asked her to be. So far there are 3 members to this group.

But it is all up to you.
thanks
mike

jerbl · 2005-09-15 12:54:50

WE'RE NOT WORTHY, NOT WORTHY, NOT WORTHY and all that other stuff. I forgot my password (" ) ( ") Help Please...

Seraphim Moonshadow · 2005-09-15 14:17:49

Um, well..um..er...um. Well. Chicken Dance? Alllllllllright. Finnnnnnnnnne. I'll post something. But...moo. Just moo. Just moo? There are Moos in Klonoa 2....

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